let me know what you think tbh
let me know what you think tbh
Originally Posted by doctor_wp
I listened to the whole thing and I am about to give you feedback so turn your ego down and receive this from a good place:
- Your flow is strong and consistent, you can change tempos well, etc.
- The Curse song was the best overall and I will tell you why shortly.
- Your EP doesn't have a theme. It should play like a movie or a story. The transition between bodies of work should be seamless, yours was abrupt and directionless.
- There was no connection to your listener. One song you were rhyming incest, another you were talking about cow tipping, and how people don't compare to you. A song shouldn't be punchlines thrown together over a beat and hook, it should mean something. People should get value when they listen to a track. That value could come in terms of connecting, resonating, or feeling good. Most of your songs did none of the aforementioned.
- Your flow is strong as mentioned above, but it's monotonous, not in the way you switch speeds to beats, but your emotion and delivery is stale.
- You don’t need to say … Moose on the Outro. That’s very netceeish, what reputable folks mention the word outro on the outro and say it’s them on their own song?
If you did not read all of the above, read this tl;dr: who is your audience and why should they buy your album? Why should they spend their time listening to your music, what are YOU giving THEM?
Music changes lives. It lifts you up when you're down, it has an incredible ability to move people.
Yo this shit is dope! If it was for sale in the store I would buy two copies
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You’ll never see the pain I hide behind a flipped frown
Jook It doesn’t know culture so don’t listen to him
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You’ll never see the pain I hide behind a flipped frown
I tried to teach nigguhs how to be kings
And all they ever wanted to be was soldiers.
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I unstickied your last due to poor reception so I'm skeptical about doing the same for this
Where were you when I recorded in the bathroom?
1 by 1 dope tracks
gave me a semi
Everything the mind knows is the past. If you recognize something its because youve had it before otherwise you wouldnt recognize it. This recognition/memory of knowing it before prevents you from seeing it new. Similarly, an experience is only recognized as an experience because youve had one before, otherwise you wouldnt know it was one. So experiences arent new. They are dead continuations of the past. You wont find change in the past. Dont seek a change through experiences.
nawmchomsky?
Moose avoiding his own thread? Cmon man.
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Naw he said he likes to drop and give it space for a few days and let it marinate
Everything the mind knows is the past. If you recognize something its because youve had it before otherwise you wouldnt recognize it. This recognition/memory of knowing it before prevents you from seeing it new. Similarly, an experience is only recognized as an experience because youve had one before, otherwise you wouldnt know it was one. So experiences arent new. They are dead continuations of the past. You wont find change in the past. Dont seek a change through experiences.
nawmchomsky?
Damn just like his draws..... back 2 back shitty releases just like his idol
Where were you when I recorded in the bathroom?
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