Dementia ~ Big Moose

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Big Moose
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Dementia ~ Big Moose

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Yall told me to be vulnerable and gay to be good at rapping so I tried. I couldn't address every criticism at once, im going to favor a certain temp and style of production. I don't think it is a bad thing to know what suits you but of course there is nothing wrong with experimenting. pause. In any case, I think I managed to write and an entire song (an admittedly short one) that is actually about something. Tell me why it is gay



i said momma its a snow day, pull me on that sled
you took off and ran too fast, i fell and hit my head
ok i think im dead, think I remember thinkin
but then you came back to me, and i was my son Lincoln

or maybe I was Marshall, but you think Im my dad
remind you that he passed, i see it makes u sad
and really its my bad, should try to hide that secret
i tell it every time tho, cuz it aint mine to keep it

i know you miss your mother, see Mildred on your mind
i know you find me other, you're only lost in time
i wish i'd known your father, i'd kill to know my own
i cant bring back the dead, but will protect this home

and i know everywhere i roam, i won't step alone
you might forget you taught 'em, but the lessons hold
got a lot been on my mind, i count the blessings tho
spitting image of my father but im def no clone

i know every generation is a stepping stone
teach my boys to teach the next and feel ur presence grow
been thru drama with they mama, never left the home
i said you might forget you taught 'em, but the lessons hold

think i finally found the beat for you momma
maybe i can finally speak to you momma
and i cannot always be with you momma, but
just know my children gonna breathe for you momma
ya i think i found the beat for you momma
feels like i can finally speak to you momma,
and i cannot always be with you momma, but
just know my children gonna breathe for you momma
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I fuck with this


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Much better. Stick to this - the battle rap shit is tired and boring

Now, let’s work on switching the flow up.


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Bump to the top imo
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First moose song I fuck with man, good shit

If you continue to drop real shit, it’s only a matter of time before one of ya joints go viral. You’re good dawg.
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Good job.


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Moose I've literally been telling you to do this for years
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